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Friday 27 July 2018

DOC should think again about using 1080

I disagree with 1080 because it is well capable of killing native wildlife.

As well, as pests, like certain rodents and marsupials, 1080 has also killed insects, birds, livestock and some pets and plants, which it isn't supposed to do.

Every 3 years, 1080 eradicates 25% of kea, as well as 1,000's of other unfortunate native animals.

I feel heavily unsatisfied with 1080, about their dark secrete of killing native wildlife, also something must be done soon about this problem

8 comments:

  1. Hey Ari. That is AWESOME. So persuasive. Big, nice words that are really impactful.

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    1. Thank you Ella, what can I improve on.

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  2. Hi Ari its me Charlie. You have excellent word selection/vocab. You could add a few more ideas in this paragraph. Other then that this is one of the best persuasive paragraph. BYE!

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    1. Charlie thank you, but it is a mini-paragrah.

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  3. nice picture is it original

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  4. Thankyou seth

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  5. so great keep up that AWESOME punctuation

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