Moment in time poem-playing with a kitten

WALT: create a moment in time poem.
I think I could make it more descriptive.

Tui whanau rubric

WALT: To our next steps in being a blogger.I could make the image clearer

Cat's eyes

Cat’s eyes

Isolated in the unforgiving blackness, remains dark shadow of pitch black fur with bulging light-seizing eyes, on guard of its sorrow and territory.A dim reflection of a cold concrete grey in its mind-scanning light-catchers was a wary person of the animal control cautiously bellowing for this streak of feline blackness to nimbly trot out.

Deception he received,a rapid streak black jetted at him in infinite feline fury.Slice!Dice!Strip!The canine catcher and feline seizing object was no longer.Eyes of fright,falling night,the gradually illuminating light seizures depleted the energy of the host for 3 years.The streak infinite feline darkness slumbered into the blackness of night.Whoever kills the cat will be cursed with cat’s eyes.

I feel inspired and fascinated when I view this image,with a nearly infinite percentage of descriptive ideas and abstract vocabulary,but also a range of possible ideas for the task.The scenery is almost 100% an anti albino cat’s face,with camouflaging background.The emotion of of the furry cat is nervous because of the enlarged pupils.The colour of eyes is a shimmering silver colour.

         

    

About me

I go  to Kaingaroa school

My favorite subject

Reading log

Reading Log

Date	Title and author	Summary
6 June	The Bronze Horseman by Paullina Simons	This non fiction story is about how 17 year old, Tatiana tries to survive WW2 in Leningrad, Russia. Her family and friends struggle to live through the cold winter and bombing by the Germans. She goes from making tanks in Kirov, to searching for her twin brother Pasha in Luga, working as a nurse in Grechesky hospital and becoming a red cross nurse on the front lines
8 june	Stink the incredible shrinking kid By Megan Mcdonald	A young kid named Stink is the same age the other students in his class,but he dislikes the fact that he is 20 centimetres shorter than everybody else. One day he wakes up and he’s shrunk about 1 centimetre. He hears about a scientific belief, but he struggles to believe it. He cheers up after he gets a pet called Newton, a tiny red-spotted baby salamander

How many cats do you have?

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