Cat’s eyes
Isolated in the unforgiving blackness, remains dark shadow of pitch black fur with bulging light-seizing eyes, on guard of its sorrow and territory.A dim reflection of a cold concrete grey in its mind-scanning light-catchers was a wary person of the animal control cautiously bellowing for this streak of feline blackness to nimbly trot out.
Deception he received,a rapid streak black jetted at him in infinite feline fury.Slice!Dice!Strip!The canine catcher and feline seizing object was no longer.Eyes of fright,falling night,the gradually illuminating light seizures depleted the energy of the host for 3 years.The streak infinite feline darkness slumbered into the blackness of night.Whoever kills the cat will be cursed with cat’s eyes.
I feel inspired and fascinated when I view this image,with a nearly infinite percentage of descriptive ideas and abstract vocabulary,but also a range of possible ideas for the task.The scenery is almost 100% an anti albino cat’s face,with camouflaging background.The emotion of of the furry cat is nervous because of the enlarged pupils.The colour of eyes is a shimmering silver colour.
Hi Ari I like how your whiting is descriptive very nice, you could make the whiting a bit bigger other than that it's all good.
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Deletesorry I forgot punctuation is there anything ELSE I could work on?
ReplyDeleteyou could work on making the sentins sound correct. could I work on anything?
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