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On the first day of technology for 2020, the year 8 students, which was my group were chosen for the subject on cooking. At first, the teacher, Miss Du Flou introduced us into the the classroom, and then we got our folders out, and then put whole group organised ourselves into groups of 2. The task we were given was to make corn fritters, which ingredients consisted of egg, corn and pepper. This task was not too difficult yet not simple and easy. I personally found the task fun because I enjoyed mixing the eggs into liquid, and also doing the dishes, and I was working Joshua.
Kia ora Ari I like how you explained where and which class you went in. I like how you said you went into Miss Du flo class. You even said she talk us through what we were meant to do ka pai keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteGood description and a great paragraph it describes every thing you did at tech.
ReplyDeleteHi Louie, thank you for your positive comment, but you could have made it longer
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